Neela Nath


4 Stages- - (Love)


Your presence
is an experience
of rare love I ever
had...
My sorrows evaporate,
I feel no more sad.

In your absence
the aura encompasses
me with care,
with none I wanna
share!
I'll die soon,
my soul will
wait for you
there(?) .

How are you
without me?
Not well,
I can distinctly
see!
I am searching
you on land
in sea,
In the sky,
along the lea.
In desert the
cool breeze
which soothes your
blistered body,
it's me!

You are not in my
life, another
butterfly has
hijacked you
from me- - - - -
go be happy
and your face
I don't want
to see.

Submitted: Wednesday, April 24, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, September 25, 2013

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(It happens- - - -love comes, goes and hardly stays)

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  • Rookie - 140 Points Muhammad Ali (1/22/2014 1:36:00 AM)

    : -) . a smile, i have.
    smile in worth and worst.
    and love... love lives in life-full heart. may the Heart beats, and beats... (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,856 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/28/2013 9:38:00 AM)

    Lovely poem touching indeed...life has to move on...

    Please do write some comments for my poems too... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,246 Points Valsa George (5/8/2013 1:24:00 AM)

    Soul stirring and poignant! Free flow of unveiled emotions! ! Leaving space for others, let us move on! Nothing is static! ! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,626 Points Ken E Hall (5/6/2013 6:47:00 AM)

    Love we all want and to loose a treasure is hard to imagine you present it with honesty from your heart...regards (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,920 Points Hans Vr (4/30/2013 8:48:00 PM)

    Deep and thorough.
    Another butterfly has hijacked you, so nicely written.
    there is a difference between -in love- and -love-
    the first one is something we fall in and out of, an infatuation
    the second one is a verb, a do-word, somehting we do.
    I agree that the first one comes and goes and is associated with tremendous feelings
    Very nicely written in this poetic and melodious poem (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 35,275 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (4/30/2013 8:53:00 AM)

    love smells sweetly but it is bitter and sweeter, position of tongue get you the taste/ a poem writ on based on truth thank u (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 69 Points Theodora Onken (4/28/2013 2:33:00 AM)

    Oh Harry...so deep, so bittersweet- so well penned; We can all identify with loves that we have lost! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 163 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (4/24/2013 12:04:00 PM)

    A NICE POEM ON LOST LOVE.- The lines- another buuterfly has hijacked you from me- are lovely touching lines.! (Report) Reply

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