(-) 4 (My Love) Tum/You -Bilingual Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
(-) 4 (My Love) Tum/You -Bilingual
Meri saans ho tum
Meri dhadkan ho tum
Meri jaan ho tum
Meri zindagi ho tum
Mere khwabon kaa aakar ho tum
Meri tanhayee kaa kinaara ho tum
Meri tamannao ka saakshaat ho tum
Mere badan ki kapkapin ho tum
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You are my breath
You are my heartbeat
You are my soul
You are my life
You are the shape of my dreams
You are the shore of my loneliness
You are the form of my longings
You are the trembling in my body
OK were you the one who told me such feelings could not be put into words, , , and yet this flaming piece of imagry has set the moment on fire.... and me searching for a cold glass of water.......... well done..
Nice poem. But 'kapkapi' sounds a bit feverish. What you mean is perhaps - sensation, but 'kapkapi' means shivering/trembling in pain or fear. How about -'badan ki sansanaahat'or 'thirkan'?
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4/24/2024 12:23:23 AM # 1.0.0.1119
In short everything in life- if you can spare a few minutes, pl. go through my-LOVE IS THE BASIS OF LIFE- in the PH-reflecting similar thoughts!