(4) I Wish The Rain Could Speak Of You Poem by Luis Gil de la Puente

(4) I Wish The Rain Could Speak Of You

Rating: 3.0


I wish the rain could speak of You,
sweet sad sounds
of rain drops dripping,
but no music can help.

Memories bring back dark drops
and I see the truth no one can sing.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 12 October 2009

Memories bring back dark drops and I see the truth no one can sing. wow its a great wish.. singing in the rhythm of rain drops.. wonderful and really a sweet romantic way of expression.. short but a very impressive and good poem..that i enjoyed alot and let me say, luis dear you are doing a great job..well done 10/10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 15 October 2008

wonderful soooooohing poem! .........10+ really a fine piece!

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Will Barber 08 September 2008

Without hesitation, a 10. Your talent for imagery shines through. I can only echo Sandra's encomium. 'World Class'. - Will

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Sandra Fowler 30 September 2007

Beautiful, subtle and very poignant. To give oneself away in words is the greatest gift of all. World class, Luis. One of your very best. Warm regards, Sandra

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