(375) Faded Red Dress Poem by Melvina Germain

(375) Faded Red Dress

Rating: 4.2


There you were a sight to behold,
quietly sleeping, in shimmering folds.
No heart to disturb your precious rest,
I left you lying there in a faded red dress.

Dream my darling dream as only you can
listen to the song birds, hold them in your hand

I'll take a walk several blocks away,
When I return we'll start our day.
beautiful morning, bright and clear,
a glimpse of your shadow mystically near.

Dream my darling dream as only you can
Listen to the song birds, hold them in your hand

Your body laid still, no breathing came.
Fell to my knees and called out your name.
You left me that morning in a faded red dress.
Dreams of a future never will be blessed.

Dream my darling dream as only you can
Listen to the song birds, hold them in your hand

Now all I have left are the sweet memories,
of a beautiful woman, who composed my heart.
I cry every night as my hands firmly press,
the ruffles so sheer, of that faded red dress.

Dream my darling dream as only you can
Listen to the song birds, hold them in your hand.

(375)      Faded Red Dress
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Loke Kok Yee 25 March 2016

I rarely show emotions for I grew up really hard but your sweet/sad poem nearly broke my heart I was not sure but I thought a tear came to my eye and when I tried to hold it back I could not though I tried thanks Mel

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Kim Barney 13 December 2015

Lovely poem, Melvina. It could be made into a song. It already has the chorus and everything.

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Marianna Jo Arolin 10 October 2008

I absolutely loved this, It flows so beautifully into ones heart. i give it a 10

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Bri Edwards 05 April 2017

this has been in a showcase before this year [Nov.2015], but i'm in a hurry and i'll grab it again for April 2017's as well. it is certainly worth a second showing! bri ;) thanks.

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Chelsi Ruffing 03 March 2007

That was a truly great poem. You captured so much there. I don't know any one that can write the way you did here. Wonderful poem. Chelsi

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Sylvia Frances Chan 24 October 2022

From me you get 5 Stars TOP Score or as in the past 10 Points! This poem is so very touching, tears roll upon my cheeks. CONGRATULATION, dear MELVINA, most deserving Member Poem Of The Day

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 24 October 2022

faded dress but not faded it's glorious in thy dream; it's full of happy memorable writing; nice to read the poem

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 October 2022

Many congratulations for this wonderful to have been chosen as POD

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 October 2022

A sweet poem

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This elegy has been presented so beautifully, and elegantly. It is poignant, with the love and care of the departed soul so vividly captured. I will say it is an exquisite song with its rhyme and rhythm.

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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