30 June Poem by Cigeng Zhang

30 June

Rating: 4.8


The early morning fresh rain
Gentle like blues
Dance away the grey dawn
Dance away the silence

The soft drizzle
Falling on my chin
Dancing into my eyes
Wetting my memories

I walk in the lightsome rain
Arms open to hug the rain
The gift you send from heaven
I forget your absence on 30 June

30 June
Tuesday, June 30, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: memorial
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 15 July 2016

With beauty of nature! ! With the muse of the rain. Nice work.

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Ency Bearis 09 November 2015

lovely poem, well penned

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Daniel Brick 18 October 2015

This is such a tactile poem. We can feel the rain refresh us just as it refreshed you. And that's the primary meaning of tactile, but I sensed another aspect of it. Everything in this poem is close at hand, nothing is far away or really absent.. And that's especially true of the person you address in the last stanza. You dont tell us about this person but whoever it is or was is fully present in the gentle touch of the rain, and that is just a beautiful consoling thought.

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Omar Eldamsheety 01 July 2015

Wonderful my friend... well done.

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Cigeng Zhang 01 July 2015

Thank you dear Omar for your sharing.

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Kwai Chee Low 30 June 2015

Lovely poem. I can feel the soft coolness of the rain, even as I read it. Such are the gifts of nature; and rain is one of them. You have brought out the wonder of it!

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