(3) Long Shadows Poem by Luis Gil de la Puente

(3) Long Shadows

Rating: 3.0


Horsemen on the horizon
upon a hill
keep looking at me
in the distance.

Faces rescued
from battles
in the past.

Paths without glory
seem to come back,
expecting an answer?

I dream of birds I can talk to,
of greyhounds of long shadows,
of angry cats
and guitars
about to explode.

Melodies I cannot forget
hide in my brain.
And then the dance
in that empty space...

The limelight on a silent chair,
the wake up time,
another coffee,
and miles to drive.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sonya Florentino 14 July 2009

a powerful yearning for something still so far away....quite haunting....

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Sarwar Chowdhury 08 October 2008

neat and clean ammmmmazing composition! .......10+

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Sandra Fowler 13 May 2008

Fabulous write. Very haunting and evocative. You are a fine, contemporary wordsmith. Always your friend at poemhunter. Sandra

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