25 Poem by Tori Bachue

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Tension rising
Holding on
Over my head
Marking my heart
Apathy speaking
Moreover, sheer fright
All or nothing
Recovery, but far away
Key to closure
Evermore beating
Yet stilled forever, love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stefanie Fontker 31 August 2011

I like your style, and this poem. It's very choppy, and seems to flow well in its chaos. I'm looking forward to seeing more of your poetry.

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