#248 Haiku Cactus Poem by Dorothy (Alves) Holmes
#248 Haiku Cactus
Desert flowers reach
Sun burned thirst quenchers stand tall
Castles in the air
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3/11/08
Wednesday, March 12, 2008
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Ben Gieske
11 October 2008
“Sun burned thirst quenchers” - good description of desert flowers. They might look like castles but castles sometimes have moats filled with water. I think “in the air” nullifies the water idea.
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4/25/2024 3:30:58 AM # 1.0.0.1119
all water sits in air.. it's the flesh... inside thats..juicy wet..iip