24 Hrs. Of Life Poem by ramesh rai

24 Hrs. Of Life

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24 hours is given to me
to fulfill my all commitments
not even a single second
can be added or minimized

24 hrs. of my life
is the rational factors of my life
to achieve the goal of my life
within 24 hrs. of my life

I have to complete the journey
from moon to sun
I have to laugh and cry
love and be annoyed

24 hours of my life
is more precious than
century of my life.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hardik Vaidya 12 February 2013

Ramesh Rai I admire your intellect, a well written poem, indeed all we have is 24 hours if we don't make them work as you rightly say from moon to sun, we lost them.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 17 February 2013

Each 24hours if spent wholly will certainly be precious for the Century of our lives! A beautiful advice to all! !

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Tribhawan Kaul 09 July 2013

Very nice thought. A short life of good deeds is better than a century of nothing.

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Akhtar Jawad 13 August 2014

a day of a lion is better than a century of a jackal.

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Roseann Shawiak 23 March 2014

So beautifully said Ramesh. If we cannot achieve our goals and dreams in life, within 24 hours, what good is a century of doing nothing, adding to our lives? Every moment in life is a precious petal of being. Another great idea, Ramesh. Thank you for the seasoning of reason you place in my mind through your poetry.

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 17 November 2013

Beautiful words and beautiful plans.

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Heather Wilkins 03 October 2013

2 hours would mean more than a century. good write

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 August 2013

to achieve the goal of my life.... nice one i liked..10 day and night you are right time is limited but you are committed

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