(23) Haiku Poem by Thufail Ahmed

(23) Haiku

Rating: 2.5


Blood thirsty war cries
No compromise, No ceasefire
sibling rivalry!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dorothy- A. Holmes 12 September 2008

Thufail, I love this haiku...a strong ending line showing the wars where siblings don't agree and fight on opposit sides...Such a sad song. Peace Dorothy

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