A Poet Who Loves To Sing ....AlvesHolmes


#207 Haiku Web Of Man's Deciet - Poem by A Poet Who Loves To Sing ....AlvesHolmes

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Man's web of deceit
Possesses not loveliness
Of spider's web


Jan.08

Dorothy


Comments about #207 Haiku Web Of Man's Deciet by A Poet Who Loves To Sing ....AlvesHolmes

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ben Gieske (12/30/2008 4:18:00 PM)

    Wonderful weave of ideas and good philosophy/theology. I admire the spider's web, how beautifully woven, and I have thought about how it is woven to snare its victims. But, for some reason, I have never seen the deceit behind it all. So man and sin. Sin is an imagined good that a person sees and desires; otherwise, how could it be desired; yet when the person sins s/he is caught in a web of deceit. (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,663 Points Is It Poetry (12/13/2008 5:20:00 PM)

    when practiced to decieve the young..much...bleet in heat of your words...Thank you.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 13, 2008

Poem Edited: Monday, January 12, 2009


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