2014 Poem by Magic Box

2014

Rating: 5.0


My cloud rose up again,
Travelled from end to start,
Our love wont go in vain,
Coz, always you're in my heart! !

That wind came back her way,
To meet him, lonely cloud,
She gave heart, vowed to stay,
Knowing, she'd ever be loved! !

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
After waiting for 19 months patiently......



'YES, Aswath'


Yippiee......! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !


Wish you all a damn good 2014! ! ! !
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Babatunde Aremu 25 December 2013

Great poem, I like it. Pls read and comment on my poems e.g Mr Soldier, Crazy For Fashion, Good Family and comment

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Shahzia Batool 25 December 2013

wishing you the same happy new and peaceful year li'l bro! may this coming year and all years keep you in joyous positive spirit ameen... remember, the term joyous positive is copied from Sylvia Plath :)

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Kavya . 26 December 2013

HAPPY NEW YEAR bro...........be happy always.......wat an I to interpret from this poem, huh? : -) great.....

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Dinesan Madathil 26 December 2013

Let that love be bloomed and let a baby born to them in 2015. Happy new year to the duo.

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Valsa George 26 December 2013

I see the VICTOR standing jubilant with his prized TROPHY! Kudos! Hop ahead! ! A very very happy New Year, Aswath! !

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Akhtar Jawad 27 May 2014

2013 and 2014 both are lovely poems and should be read together.

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Geetha Jayakumar 28 April 2014

Aswath you are missing or is the exam preparations going on in full swing?

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Geetha Jayakumar 29 December 2013

Fantastic poem Aswath..Happy to see your Lovely dream is going to be fulfilled in 2014. God Bless you. Wishing you a Happy and Prosperous New Year 2014.

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Aswath Raman 29 December 2013

@Sallam Yassin: Thanks mate @Valsa Ma'am: My most prized possession! ! @Dinesh Sir: Miles to go before that! @Kavya Akka: Everything! @Shahzia didi: Oh thanks a lot!

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Sallam Yassin 27 December 2013

happy days and nights and hours and minutes and seconds in the new year and ever and be blessed with love every day

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