Magic Box

Rookie - 0 Points (September 3,1992)

2014


My cloud rose up again,
Travelled from end to start,
Our love wont go in vain,
Coz, always you're in my heart! !

That wind came back her way,
To meet him, lonely cloud,
She gave heart, vowed to stay,
Knowing, she'd ever be loved! !

Submitted: Wednesday, December 25, 2013
Edited: Thursday, December 26, 2013

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After waiting for 19 months patiently......



'YES, Aswath'


Yippiee......! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !


Wish you all a damn good 2014! ! ! !

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  • Bronze Star - 6,738 Points Geetha Jayakumar (12/29/2013 12:36:00 PM)

    Fantastic poem Aswath..Happy to see your Lovely dream is going to be fulfilled in 2014. God Bless you.
    Wishing you a Happy and Prosperous New Year 2014. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Aswath Raman (12/29/2013 12:31:00 PM)

    @Sallam Yassin: Thanks mate
    @Valsa Ma'am: My most prized possession! !
    @Dinesh Sir: Miles to go before that!
    @Kavya Akka: Everything!
    @Shahzia didi: Oh thanks a lot! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,642 Points Sallam Yassin (12/27/2013 2:10:00 PM)

    happy days and nights
    and hours and minutes and seconds
    in the new year and ever
    and be blessed with love every day (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,033 Points Valsa George (12/26/2013 11:33:00 PM)

    I see the VICTOR standing jubilant with his prized TROPHY! Kudos! Hop ahead! ! A very very happy New Year, Aswath! ! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,553 Points Dinesh Nair (12/26/2013 10:13:00 AM)

    Let that love be bloomed and let a baby born to them in 2015. Happy new year to the duo. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 417 Points Kavya . (12/26/2013 3:48:00 AM)

    HAPPY NEW YEAR bro...........be happy always.......wat an I to interpret from this poem, huh? : -) great..... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 568 Points Shahzia Batool (12/25/2013 11:30:00 PM)

    wishing you the same happy new and peaceful year li'l bro!

    may this coming year and all years keep you in joyous positive spirit ameen...
    remember, the term joyous positive is copied from Sylvia Plath :) (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,467 Points Babatunde Aremu (12/25/2013 12:32:00 PM)

    Great poem, I like it. Pls read and comment on my poems e.g Mr Soldier, Crazy For Fashion, Good Family and comment (Report) Reply

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