2008: Things I Don'T Want To Leave Behind Poem by Tom J. Mariani

2008: Things I Don'T Want To Leave Behind

Rating: 5.0


Didn't want to leave you
With a bad imnpression
Didn't want to take you
In the wrong direction

Didn't want to fool you
About my affection
Didn't want to leave you
With my last confession

I didn't want to end up
Without a reflection
Didn't want to accept fate
In the end there's no deception

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carol Rhodes 17 August 2008

SHORT, TO THE POINT AND SWEET. FOR A MAN OF MANY WORDS, IMAGES, THIS IS JUST ANOTHER DIRECT/CLEAR ROAD WITH TRUTH AND MEANING. THANK YOU. CAROL

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Ashley Reeves 13 March 2008

great poem! Try and make the sentences longer t encourage the reader

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Tom J. Mariani

Tom J. Mariani

San Francisco, CA
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