2005/07 A House Is Not A Home Poem by Kiracakes09 ...

2005/07 A House Is Not A Home

Rating: 4.0


The house we've built
looked so pretty on the outside
now its filled with only my feelings
and now you hardly ever come in
those times when you do
its just a shell
just your body, not your heart
just your peck, not your kiss
just your hug, not your embrace
i need your love
i need you to want me
if you dont want me then why are you in my house
that's right, my house
you've moved your feelings, your furniture out
my home gets chilly at night
imprints of your pictures on the wall
toothbrush still in the holder
toilet seat still up

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Priyanka Shetty 22 March 2008

i agree.. its touching... awesome poem......

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 22 March 2008

a home is a home for the homeless..........a great place to live..........

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RoJa Mitchell 20 July 2005

great poem, it's touching and neat, and that's good ;)

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