2- The Untitled Love Verses Poem by sarwar chowdhury

2- The Untitled Love Verses

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a.
I am a passer-by here on the way to eternity
and she too.
O Angel-like woman
Come near, wait for a while
Let me see your to praise for
God's artwork.

b.
She told
she is touched by heart-felt words of mine
but she did not know-
those words came out
because I were touched by her floral mind!

c.
I am missing you
and my heart cry looking at far
Be blessed o dear wherever you are!

d.
One sight I see with two eyes
Everyday the sun has a rise.

e.
Beloved offered a dream
that was sweeter than all sweet
I can not explain the gleam
came across, fearing if she quit.

f.
Thirsty classic soil
every inch thirsty

Kisses are travelling
and she bestows
and he bestows
Passion has stopped the time

The mingled love uncovered them
suppressed feeling of agony has gone
Flesh and spirit make a math-
one plus one equal to one (1+1=1) .
They have been meaning each other.


g.
Yes, I am a perfect stranger
I am alone, I am a passer-by
Believe me, I don’t know who am I.

h.
Trust not the lust-driven lover, never
A true lover can not be cruel ever.

i.
How much pain infused in my heart you don't know!
Yet I am living with your feeling wherever you go!


J.
Why are you looking at that bright star, dear!
That is twinkling
That is giggling
That is crying
That has magnetism
That has tremendous radiance.
Have you obsessed!
Be quite please be quite!

Bcause that can not be touched
Because that can not be owned.
Because that can be loved only from far away!

Just be choked with tears when it would be out of sight for ever!

©copyright by sarwar chowdhury. all rights reserved.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geeta Nair 28 August 2008

Imagination well penned.........gud work, loved.... regards, geets

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Deepti Agarwal 28 August 2008

beautifully crafted piece of work... absolutely amazing....

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Christopher Rivera 30 August 2008

very interesting, makes me all warm inside.

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Onelia Avelar 31 August 2008

...'touched by heart-felt words of' yours - the heart-felt, passionate words of love are the clue to the charm of your poem - they make it really touching!

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Atef Ayadi 02 September 2008

i read your poems and all the options in order sometimes i skip i am always look for more hidden details. now that i finally read your optional poem without any heart damage or attacks; it looks that you are easily creative and seductive, but i hopped more more gas and more effective burning love's fire.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 27 November 2009

‘…Kisses are traveling // and she bestows // and he bestows // Passion has stopped the time…’ Excellent sojourner dear my Poet…brilliance galore.. Ten+++ Ms. Nivedita UK Cordially invite you read my poems with comments and….please watch out new posts: RECIPE OF MY FIRST KISS niv

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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 02 September 2009

'...Thirsty classic soil every inch thirsty...' Why for? Written in 'white-ink'. Namaste-ji and Namaskar. Ten dr. sakti

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Kelly Kel 22 February 2009

very nice! I love your unique style and the important meaning behind your words. If you have time could you take a look at some of mine. Best!

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Miriam Maia Padua 15 January 2009

beautiful piece....titled beautifully...interesting every verses hides pain and longing of love very creative in style..... very unique....10+++++

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 20 October 2008

WOW... IN THE TOP 500... IT S WRITTEN WITH A DIFFERING STYLE THT ONE DOESNT SEE TODAY... GREAT EFFORT AT UNTITLED LOVE VERSES... :)

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sarwar chowdhury

sarwar chowdhury

Origin- Bangladesh, Living abroad.
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