2 Sides Of The Same Story By Riley Rhodes And Vanessa Feliciano Poem by vanessa feliciano

2 Sides Of The Same Story By Riley Rhodes And Vanessa Feliciano

Rating: 5.0


My Best friend is the best thing that has ever happened to me
He makes me laugh
He sets me free
He makes me feel safe when he holds me tight
He makes me feel warm
Through stormy nights.
We share everything
Our clothes our beds
So this makes me wonder
What emotion has been fed?
I love him more than i ever thought possible
This love feels so strong
It feels unstoppable.
But is it the love that HE thinks it is?
Or is it the love
That's not meant to live?
I am breaking him slowly
I can see it i can tell
When i speak of others in my life
It puts him through hell.
I haven't made it that far with him
Not that intimate love
To me he's so innocent
Pure like a dove
So I don't see him as my lover
But I'm sure i don't see him
As my brother

I love her more than the heavens love earth
but she doesn't see
She never see's
I need her.
I'd die for her
Give my life for her
But she doesn't see
Iv chosen her over
My family heritage
Not even the binds of the Cherokee
Can stop my love for her.
My family will not try to stop me
They see my devotion
But...she never see's
She never see's
Must i scream it out?
Call it to the world?
Do i need to tell all
just for one to listen?
My family calls this...obsession disgraceful
...i don't care
Never have...never will
i need her like the deserts need rain
like the starving need food
Like the lost need the way.
Her love may be different but that will never stop me
never
Someday i swear
She will see
She will see

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James S Newcomb Lang 17 December 2009

Lovely, it sounds as though you have mutual uxorious love.

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Robert Uy 03 December 2009

Nice idea, different, of having two speakers confessing in one poem though not really conversing with each other.

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David Joaquin 19 November 2009

I know the sentiments of this poem all to well. Excellent 10/10.

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Emily Michele 19 November 2009

I LOVE THIS POEM! i relate to this poem alot i feel more like the guys point of view because i too am in love with my best friend and he doesn't like me back.: (This is really well written.

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