2 Girls Poem by john o'connell

2 Girls

Rating: 4.2


2 girls
full of joy,
linked
arm in arm,
skipping
down the road -
not knowing
yet
what the future
has in store
for them.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naida Nepascua Supnet 07 November 2010

i like this because you made me see their feet as they skip, their hair as the wind blows, and their laughter as they laugh-it is full of images.

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Kesav Easwaran 16 May 2010

childhood...happiness...friendship...what's in store? True reflection on possibles of an elderly mind...nicely presented...10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 March 2010

2 girls full of joy, linked arm in arm, skipping.....and who else knows it....life goes on with oe without us...be part of it, flow with it and most important never regret it......lovely concept....10... read mine.... i miss

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john o'connell

john o'connell

Limerick, Ireland
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