2,1,None, Or More Poem by David DeSantis

2,1,None, Or More

Rating: 3.0


And I've been thinking
While I'm lusting
About a sun dream
And new play things
I've been moving
On a thin beam
It's a bright thing
I've been balancing
To be loving
With an old fling
As she texts me
Like a checked king
Has been making
Me think tempting
things that could be
while one's sleeping.
There's this new game
And she's untamed
While the old game
Is perfecting
All the things that
I once wanted
But not wanting
Now to have them
And I'm a fool that
Cannot decide when
He should roll them
To find seven
Maybe someday
They will move me
Or when lonely
I will give in
But until then
I'll stay hitting
it's an old game
On which I'm betting.

Tuesday, September 16, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: rap
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ivan Donn Carswell 01 October 2008

there is an echoed 'ring' reverberating throughout this one - an acoustic poem with subliminal message! Rgds, Ivan

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Tsira Goge 26 September 2008

But until then I’ll stay hitting it’s an old game On which I’m betting. .................................. well... Remarkable work... 10... Tsira

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Anita Atina 25 September 2008

Aha delightful is this poem, as delightful as the game that's being played

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Cheeky with some other ingredients thrown in with good measure. Great pace and flow here D. t x

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