Palas Kumar Ray (8/7/2008 1:43:00 PM)
Cherryblossomfresh! ! !
(10) |
Herbert Nehrlich (8/1/2007 7:42:00 AM)
Hey there, Ravinder
you've been inside the sewers
too long. You smell now.
It was not I who,
through haikus made you sick, sir
it is your liver.
You need curcumin
blown into the rear passage
you may look better. |
Ravinder Malhotra (7/29/2007 3:00:00 AM)
I read today some Haiku
By Herbert Nehrlich
It hardly gave me pleasure
But rather left me sick
Haiku is like raw meat
Served and called cuisine
Not for people with some sense
Relished by the insane |
K K (3/6/2007 7:48:00 AM)
~snicker~ Funny write :)
KK |
Linda Hepner (1/28/2006 9:44:00 PM)
Nice to open my computer and read this! Lucky man to see such blossoming bosoms!
Linda |
Raynette Eitel (1/19/2006 9:08:00 AM)
Oh dear, should we call a doctor? :) Funny poem, Herbert!
Raynette |
Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari (1/19/2006 7:50:00 AM)
~giggle~ I had a good laugh, thanks for making my morning :) |
Mary Nagy (1/19/2006 6:34:00 AM)
This made me laugh Herbert. I can't decide if this is ''sweet'' or ''corny''.......maybe just enough of both to be a wonderful poem! Sincerely, Mary |
Jeremiah Shine (1/19/2006 6:19:00 AM)
my first instinct was...he still loves her! then i began to wonder...is it a physical condition of the speaker or a description of the loss of desire? could go either way like a greek theatre mask! |
