15 Things I Want Poem by Kelli D. Williams

15 Things I Want

Rating: 5.0


I want to decide what I do
Not hide behind you
I want to laugh and be happy
Not sad and blue
I want to be with my family the whole day through
And I want to be with my friends to
I want to walk on the beach
And keep my goals in reach
I want to walk in the door
And not be sad anymore
I want to kiss you in the moonlight
And hold you through the night
And I want it to feel right
But above all these things I want to do
I want to come home
And not feel all alone with you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anshul Gupta 30 August 2011

This is a nicely knit poetic expression of your longing to be free and happy...

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Lynn Glover 03 December 2010

Sounds as though there may be a little controlling by someone in this poem. You are right, you need your space and so does he. Stand true to your goals and reach out for them. Good write.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 03 December 2010

Very captivating indeed. Rich in imagery and style. I really appreciate it. An honest attempt to present your feeligs.

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