15 Minutes Of Ecstasy (For Lovers) Poem by Ray Lucero

15 Minutes Of Ecstasy (For Lovers)

Rating: 4.2


Before reluctant sun arose
one summer’s morn,
Her lithe, naked body
lay next to me

On downy pillow her flaxen
locks did adorn,
Heated passion thru me rushed
“Oh, sweet agony”

Hungry hands explored the
fullness of her landscape,
I felt the roundness of her breasts
a nipple I did pinch

Ere long, my veiled heart
she’d soon undrape,
She moaned a sigh of pleasure,
and gave a subtle flinch

Two bodies conjoined in bliss
all else did fade away,
Earth nor God Himself
would dare interfere

I in her, her in me
our love we'd not betray,
Our sacred act felt no guilt
as finish then grew near

'15 minutes of ecstasy' as
two lovers fulfilled as one

She morphed into nights Silver Moon,
and I the Central Sun

ROTMS

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 06 December 2005

Beautiful! ! Seductive! ! ! Very nice! !

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Ronberge .. 06 December 2005

I know I'll get flak for this but... Just fifteen minutes? Just kidding! Amicalement votre, Ronberge

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***** ********* 06 December 2005

Blimey Ray! I'd rather have the ecstacy than the fame, if I had the choice in your poem. The nippled pinching made me flinch though! 10 from Chocy Chip Tai! lol

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Mary Nagy 07 December 2005

Such an intimate poem.............not over the edge with eroticism.........you kept it beautiful. That's nice. sincerely, Mary

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Michael Stephens 21 January 2006

Another good one from Ray, who is quickly becoming a favorite. And boy, does it ever capture the essence of those moments of ecstasy that are all too rare in most of our lives - and thus all the more precious as well. Bravo!

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Al Ramos 13 September 2008

! 5 minutes, tell me your secret. me I'm a one minute man. I know, it's sad.

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Robert E Hann 02 November 2007

Ray, A very sensual write. May I share with you my 'Poem Erotica' Robert

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Ivor Hogg 17 October 2007

it takes two make a completer entity my friend

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Lucianne Fasolo 13 September 2007

This was beautiful, I loved it! Wonderful job!

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Patricia Gale 06 January 2007

Beautiful, absolutly beautiful...........

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