13th December - My Birth Day Poem by ramesh rai

13th December - My Birth Day

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On this day, I came to this world
I cried for, where I came and with
What destiny of my life
What my mother would have thought
About her newly born baby, she might
have kissed my head with so many wishes.

My all well wishers and family members
might have enjoyed
But none had imagined about
the future struggle of my life.

My Dad had said, forehead of his son
is high so as to sky, he will blossom
and fragrance of his son will
enchant all the passers –by.

Five decades of my life is passed
still the achievement of my life
appears to be zero by zero.

Yet hopeful for my life with gross achievement
as the resonance of all hope and belief
of my parents and all well wishers
are still ALIVE.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Siyabonga A Nxumalo 18 December 2011

just still being alive at your age is alone quite an achievement, , , , your poetry is known all over the world now, , , that too is another achievement...great write Ramesh...

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Sajna Kailas 19 December 2011

Five decades of my life is passed still the achievement of my life appears to be zero by zero.by this stanza you showed that how humble you are! ! ! As a person you are a great man, very clever and Intelligent. and a nice human being, a citizen of the world! I miss to read this in dec 13th but happy to read this! ! ! God bless you! ! ! ! !

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Neetha Sasidharan 31 December 2011

be positive..hv faith in ur talents.. u r a grt poet..ur poems says dat... ur dad was correct.... nice poem

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Unwritten Soul 08 February 2012

Oh i am sure after 5decades you go through no not have 0 anymore but uncountable...it just you dont know how to count them.. :) , Ramesh i hope you still accept my wish Happy belated birthday i missed almost about a month...but the wish is eternal green...with the life you have now i hope you make all around happy with your presence...Your mom wish still true, and your dad said nothing less than to be real for you..keep it up, nice writing, that''s how 5decades work...polishing your talent.._Unwritten Soul

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Anu Sipps 25 February 2012

LIKE YOUR POEM SO NICE ONE

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Dr Library @ Debadarshi 15 October 2014

what a piece vividly reflecting emotions...happy to read this....Sir, mine is Dec 15! !

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Akhtar Jawad 17 May 2014

Every new born child comes in this world with a message that God is not yet dejected with the human beings(Tagore) A nice poem.

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Khairul Ahsan 27 February 2014

You have expressed nice thoughts on your birthday. You have remembered your parents, and family members. You have looked back at the last five decades of your life and felt reassured: 'Yet hopeful for my life with gross achievement as the resonance of all hope and belief of my parents and all well wishers are still ALIVE.' - Very well done!

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Geetha Jayakumar 17 December 2013

Many many Happy returns of the day. Please do accept my belated wishes. Superb write. Loved reading it.

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Shahzia Batool 13 December 2013

Hopes and beliefs of well-wishers, and Dad's expectations can never be wrong...the first cry of a baby proclaims his arrival and substantial existence in the world, not any sadness... Happy Birthday! ! !

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