(129) Morning Walk Splash Poem by Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

(129) Morning Walk Splash

Rating: 2.7


We went for a morning walk
As early as could go
I just found an excuse to play some pranks
So I went with them pronto
We walked on and on
We walked moving back and forth our hands
And on the way I saw many
Different kinds of sands
Suddenly I heard a strange eerie noise
And mom started shouting, “Run! ”
I thought an alien had come, I was so scared
The last thing I could think about was having fun
An alien! Seriously
You must think I’m insane
But later I found out that the sound
Came because it started to rain!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr. Kolitha Lelwala 19 July 2008

Wow, nice poem. Well done.

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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

Cochin(India)
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