128. I Found The Best Part Of Me Poem by Jaden Knight

128. I Found The Best Part Of Me

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I found the best part of me
all alone in the dark
half dead and barely conscious
shivering in an now disused playground
wrapped up in a long forgotten memory
abandoned in the bleak coldness of my history

What happened to it was long forgotten
none were there who would remember it well
all I know was that it was lost
and quite by chance was it rediscovered

The recovery was difficult and not the quickest
but certain people were there to the end
NCB I will thank you forever
your tears helped heal old wounds from long ago
I know that you did not make them by your own hand
but grateful am I for your assistance in their sealing

I found the best part of me months later
standing enjoying the sunshine
surrounded by those who care
fully alive and in the present
I can even see it’s smile
as it walks with me towards the future

Thursday, March 20, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 20 March 2014

A really fantastic poem, fantastic work.

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Roseann Shawiak 23 March 2014

Wonderful poem John. I love this poem, it gets close to your heart, saddens a bit, then brings happiness to light. RoseAnn

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Alesia Leach 02 October 2014

A beautiful poem and deeply moving. Thank you

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Nicole Pellerino 01 April 2014

Beautiful work. Keep writing. You have a talent

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Noreen Carden 27 March 2014

Great poem written from the heart well done

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Tanya Gupta 27 March 2014

very impressive! ... keep writing

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Renee Sinclair 24 March 2014

I loved this, and great job. keep writing!

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