11: 11 Poem by Kaylee Questionable

11: 11

Rating: 5.0


I wish,
I wasn't paranoid.
I wish,
He wasnt paranoid.
I wish,
I wasn't crazy.
I wish
he wasn't crazy.
I wish,
I would make up my mind.
I wish,
He would make up his mind.
I wish,
I wasn't afraid.
I wish,
he wasn't afraid.
I wish,
I didn't care
I wish'
he didn't care.
I wish,
I hated him.
I wish,
He hated me.
I wish,
I didn't know him
I wish,
He didn't know me.
I wish,
I was truely his.
I wish,
He was truely mine.
I wish,
It would stop.
I wish,
It would go.

You can't see the stars
tonight.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Gieske 22 August 2009

A nice play on words and feelings. It's unusual to see both sides at once and rather revealing. Congratulations on your innovation.

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~ Jon London ~ 22 August 2009

Well expressed Kaylee...you have the poetic flow my friend...keep'm coming

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