(105) Dark Circles Are Cool Poem by Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

(105) Dark Circles Are Cool

Rating: 3.3


I couldn’t sleep last night
I couldn’t sleep even an hour
I couldn’t sleep how hard I tried
With all my might and power
I remember being awake
Those eight hours I was alive
Ten, eleven, twelve, one
Two, three, four, five
I have ugly dark circles under my eyes
Now, how am I to go to school?
All I have to hope is that
My classmates think it’s cool!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indigo Christman 27 January 2008

Tee hee... I really liked this one... I can definitly relate to it... I actually didn't get any sleep last night... I watched a movie and have been exploring this site for almost four hours... so I am really hoping that dark circles are cool right now too.

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Melvina Germain 29 August 2007

I guess that means you went to school and that for sure is very cool, wonderful read Risha.--Melvina--

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Patricia Gale 18 July 2007

I enjoyed this one... makes me cool too then. I couldn't sleep a wink last night! A delight as always young lady!

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Sandra Fowler 18 July 2007

Very charming. I am sure you are a 'cool' little girl with or without the dark circles. Take care. Warm regards, Sandra

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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

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