1002 Russian Haiku Poem by John Knight

1002 Russian Haiku

Rating: 4.9


Russian Haiku resists definition - it defies geography and structure. Bound only by its language and the internet - it finds ways to mix Russian literary tradition with Japanese style and Western logic. It is in its infancy and has yet to establish a boundary between real and imagined - self and the world. Everything is possible in this virtual thought environment. In the late ninteen nineties the Japanese Embassy in Moscow sponsored the first Russian Haiku Contest and recieved ten thousand entries. Haiku is alive and well in Russia. Personally I find there is a gentle and ephemeral quality about the Russian Haikus. Some items - transalted into English - are shown below. It would be nice if Russian members of the PH family could comment and provide some examples of their own.

train starting off
the silent rise of
separated voices

my mitten
falling in the snow
steaming

summer dress
so many flowers
on the plump girl

forgotten puppets
with loose tangled strings
so free so helpless

watching 'Nutcracker'
she eaats pistachios
from a paper bag

rain has stopped
people wih open umbrellas
don't know why we smirk

first snowflakes
I love them too much - to believe
they'll melt at noon

little girl - revolving door at GUM
not entering - not exiting
just revloving

a perfect star
in the tear of my old
umbrella

first snow
walking home I draw pictures
on car roofs

brushing the snow
out of her hair - she stares
at the bridal shop window

on pink wall paper
a dog shaped shadow of my hand
theatre for one

I hope you enjoy these please write a comment and score!

(John Knight - Colchester - December 2009)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Howardson 08 December 2009

I did. I really did enjoy reading them. The visualization is just perfect. good work.

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Deborah Cromer 08 December 2009

Wonderful collection of outstanding, individual groups of HAIKU. Delightful to read! Very, very interesting and most enjoyable. Debbie

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Janell Cressman 08 December 2009

very awesome poem as always

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Ruth Walters 09 December 2009

Very clever John, they are difficult things to get right. I've been dabbling myself of late. Ruthie

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Sandra Fowler 06 March 2010

Exceptional. I love the ones about snow. But each one is endowed with special grace.10/10. Always your friend, Sandra

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Raj Nandy 12 January 2010

DEAR JOHN, I HAVE NEVER WRITTEN A HAIKU TILL DATE! BUT I ENJOYED READING THESE HAIKUS & ALSO LEARNT SOMETHING ABOUT RUSSIAN HAIKUS! THANKS FOR SHARING! -Raj

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 06 January 2010

‘…rain has stopped // people wih open umbrellas // don't know why we smirk…’ I liked this most and without smirk 10++ Excellent…Poets are ‘Fusionist’ not ‘Fissionist’ and more over Fictionist’ Haiku: Japanese + Russian + English [+ may be Esperanto LOL! ] … Nice emotion you’re nurturing and we’re fortunate to get them under one Poetic Umbrella of Sr. Poet John Knight…thank you Sir… Ms. Nivedita UK

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 20 December 2009

well done! I enjoyed it! 10+++

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fleur de lys 19 December 2009

Each of them a gorgeous vignette. 10+

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