10 Steps Poem by Tim Vallie

10 Steps

Rating: 4.5


10 steps to greatness
10 steps to pain
10 steps to glory
10 steps to fame
10 steps to lonliness
10 steps to hurt
10 steps to happiness
Or a face full of dirt
Nothing makes sense
Nothing seems right
Is it all worth a chance?
Is it all worth a fight?
10 steps to love
10 steps to war
10 steps to freedom
10 steps to the door.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shania K. Younce 16 March 2014

It makes all the sense. Some things don't have enough sense to make sense. Which is why it makes sense. Life is chancing of all undeserving and so risk is always. We make what we can and move on. We are not supposed to understand everything in life. There are two things I could never want: I could never want to live forever and know everything! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Bien!

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Adeline Foster 09 August 2012

The concept is truly imaginative and you have handled it well. Read mine – Indebted – Adeline

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Ramesh Rai 01 May 2012

okay, i agree bt why? i also agree a nice write

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