10.10 Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi
10.10
(dedicated to Saint Cynosure, a poet friend at poemhunter)
Bread is dancing inside December
I think I know what I’m doing
Wet road is so dark, so dark
Cute children play hide and seek
Sweaty farmers dig very deep holes
Who’s wrong and who’s right?
(inspired by Deep Purple’s Perfect Strangers)
10 out of 10, I am stuned to silence as I read this, such crazy images and thoughts blended together to form a powerful idea (if I understood correctly) , I love it.
oh it is great image the road, the children, the farms and everything i like it well done and good one
Cute children play hide and seek Sweaty farmers dig very deep holes Who’s wrong and who’s right? /Almighty is only right in assertionand rest is lft to us to waitn translate into action... we may be rigvht or wrong... lovely piece....10 read mine.... man proposed...... humblesubmission..prayer
I don't know.Niether do I know much about the pop group Deep Purple.I'll have to do a bit of research.
They're all right in their own way perhaps? Each of us with different agenda's. I love short meaningful poems, well done. Ruthy
Astounding imagery written.....nice deep thought provoking poem!
Search me....but I know that lotsa people have suffered trying to get at the answer. Cheers. Subroto
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 6:50:58 AM # 1.0.0.1119
wow saint cyosure will be happy nice poem regards anjali