1- Am Being Killed By Love Poem by sarwar chowdhury

1- Am Being Killed By Love

Rating: 4.9


'.........Love; It kills slowly and painfully...'
-Khalil Gibran
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Hello friends!
Accept as true!
Am being burned!
Am being pulverized!
Am being pierced!
No acquittance
No way to run away
Am being killed by!
My heart being drilled by love!

Love killing me to be a PERFECT LOVER!
Love killing me to transform 'dust into pure gold'.

Love successfully have captured me
Love kissing me to die
Love embracing me to fly
Love hugging me to say good-bye!

Yeah, My friend Khalil,
I know
Love killed out thou!
What are you doing now?
Are you looking at this world-
'as infants look upon the breast of their mother'? (Khalil said)

Listen, my beloved,
I see thy all over, always.
Was peering into thy heart all along.
Why God's eyes upon his beloved every step!

Our lips thirsty
Seeking coupling.
What can I do dear!
I am ordered-
'Seek thirsty, do not seek water.' (Rumi said)

If thy give a cup of venom
I will drink with joy!
And my final words would be-
Let me die
hiding face my
into bosom thy!

Oh! Am being burned!
No way to run away
It's only thy and HE concerned!
Am being killed by Love!


Yes, Me too, will say, as khalil emitted-
'Good-bye my beloved; I must leave
before the heartening moon vanishes'!

Loving thy I will die-
this is the truth.
May our love evolve in ‘devine romance’!

Kill, kill me kill
Drill, drill my heart by love thou
I would be a PERFECT LOVER to know!

Love killing me to transform 'dust into pure gold'.

©copyright by sarwar chowdhury. all rights reserved.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
toruk macto 24 September 2008

love..hmmm.... I love the phrase 'changing dust to pure gold'... over all...its a great poem... :)

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Lousa Deyzel 24 September 2008

i really like the poem it brings out the comprxity of love. it is a 10 defnitly.

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Gargi Saha 24 September 2008

A very romantic poem. The last line is amazing Love transforming dust into gold. You get 10++

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Kendra Kainotophobia 24 September 2008

that iz amazing it really iz wow

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Seema Chowdhury 24 September 2008

nice thoughts string in a pearl of wisdom.

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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 02 September 2009

‘…Love killing me to transform 'dust into pure gold'….’ True Love has to win the litmus test for a neutral pH. Indeed when Love is achieved [I say perfect Ten of gymnastic may seem bizarre! ] then it is pure gold. Enjoyed very much. Ten Dr. sakti

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Mubeen Sadhika 16 August 2009

Marvelous. Remarkable. Fantastic. Wonderful. Awesome.

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Gabriela Nunez 14 August 2009

Love Gibran! Expressive piece :)

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Miriam Maia Padua 13 January 2009

perfect piece...a gem...moving piece... joy and pain merging feelings and great passion poured out... the fact that you have created about this very amazing lines'transform 'dust into pure gold'. love can do magic.... i too..don't really know if love can kill..but love can do everything.... ...if a story crafted into a great and wonderful poetry...it must be from Sarwar... looking forward to new....excellent piece... again.. 10+++++++++++++ and my vote...

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 20 October 2008

OMG... LOVE AND THE PAIN IT GIVES... EXPRESSED SO BFULLY...

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sarwar chowdhury

sarwar chowdhury

Origin- Bangladesh, Living abroad.
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