(1) Afterthoughts Poem by Sandra Fowler

(1) Afterthoughts

Rating: 3.3


Words will no longer come from you to me,
Handwritten from a land of minarets.
The imagery still lights my afterthoughts,
I wish you a long sunset, poet friend.

How strange the loss of letters matters when
We never met in ordinary life.
And yet, 'As always' is my signature.
I hope warmth travels safely without stamps.

My eyes look through the old panes of the soul,
Remembering work of threadbare elegance.
Perhaps such verses will survive your west,
Invoking dawn against a distant glass.

Copyright,2008, Sandra Fowler

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Muhammad Ali 08 May 2009

some feelings... very deep in your heart Sandra...! smooth lines and expression! and what for that between lines! ! ! i can do nothing fellow! ! ! superb 10.. Ali

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Ashraful Musaddeq 08 May 2009

Silky and gorgeous poem.10.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 15 May 2009

Words will no longer come from but afterthoughts will linger on.............10/10. Regards Naseer

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Alison Mary Dunn 22 May 2009

An ode of 'threadbare elegance' in itself. A wonderfully written tribute to a poet muse x

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Sameer Ahmed 20 June 2009

The introduction of somebody has been made evident through words so expressively that one feels the bondage at mental level even without a meeting. The title expresses one of the very true natures of mankind since the humanoid age that there is no end to thoughts even after the work has been done..........

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Roseann Shawiak 04 August 2013

You say we've never met in ordinary life, yet your words evoke friendship on the highest level - spiritual. Lovely poem. It somehow seems to connect poets from all over the world. What a great gift! Thank you for sharing with us. RoseAnn

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John Oconnell 02 July 2010

this perfect poem touched me very deeply and has a granary of truth in it. take care, john

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Yelena M. 03 June 2010

Dear Sandra, it is hard to express how your poems always warm my heart and bring hope and inspiration.Thanks for your poetry. With best wishes, Yelena.

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Robert Howard 02 June 2010

A heartfelt eulogy - poignant, eloquent and sincere.

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Nikunj Sharma 28 December 2009

I wish you a long sunset, poet friend............ sweet memories haunting here...nostalgia writeen all ove this stanza...a long sunset is such a vibrant phrase....I loved this one.... I hope warmth travels safely without stamps...........I tuly believe in this magnetism..warmth doesnt reuire any stamp, it travels thru all media and reaches its destination (Donno if you have read my poem callled MAGNETS) Perhaps such verses will survive your west, Invoking dawn against a distant glass............... This verse is really a masterpiece and one can really dive deep in its meaning...milions of interpretations can be drawn here...really meaningful and nice... well done Sandra...your friend must have to be special...AS ALWAYS

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Sandra Fowler

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W. Columbia, WV, USA
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