* 1 0n 1 Hand And Air Poem by Rommel Mark Dominguez Marchan
* 1 0n 1 Hand And Air
My hand is almost
tired
in field
of writing
seems the case
of my running table
where invisible ink
is striking
as if
i am chasing the words
from space or
being chased
by unprinted letters
from down deep
i can't quit
i can't retreat
i can't hold my breath
yes
it has reason
i am obliged
to follow................
thy well be done
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4/25/2024 6:18:22 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Keep on writing. Your words are there within.....God give you that potential..use it.. utilize it......share it....