(091) Cotton Candy Poem by Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

It put a smile on my face, I could feel it melt in my mouth, The coffee combo would have gotten me too.

Nice poem Risha, cotton candy and coffee, yes think I'd throw up also. Now a candy apple, more to my liking. Hugs, Diane

Serves you right for eating that sickly stuff! But as you are only 9 years old you can be forgiven. This is a nice rhyming poem, Risha. Love, Fran xx

Cotten candy... now thats one thing on earth i have never tried... But seeing what it did to you, i will pass and leave the being sick to you... Risha... a fun poem..10

Risha, I love cotton candy, but not with coffee. On its own its OK. I loved this little poem. David

Excellent imagry painted here Risha, I'm not sure I could stand the mix of cotton candy and coffee either. Oh oh too much cotton candy and of course the coffee didn't help.--Thanks Risha---Melvina

Wonderful poem, I felt nausea too. good word painting. Kolitha

Ha ha ha Good one. Don't you ever try the combination again