(081) Poetry Night........ Poem by premji premji

(081) Poetry Night........

Rating: 2.7


Prem,
How can you say
No one reads your poems
When each night
I breathe in and inhale
Their fragrant breathe
Before I go to sleep
You know, my dear friend,
I've been with this Booklet
Day and night living with it
My thoughts too they fill
Today I sat outside my house
As no network for sometime
The words for your Dhyana Buddha
They came flowing from my heart
You have become a part of me
My thoughts you dictate
You command me to write and I do
Thoughts, style and words
None my own they've born anew
Most astonishing what we do
Like a Koel who calls
And the answering call
Floats back from afar
We two sing a song
Poem with words mingling
Like Jordan into the Dead Sea
From two mad poetic hearts!

Angelina

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mamta Agarwal 22 June 2009

and the answering call floats from afar.. this is one amazing poetry night Premji. really surreal and great metaphor, not to forget romantic. 10+++ Mamta

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Raj Nandy 22 June 2009

THE KOEL IMAGERY IS REALLY GREAT! 10! -RAJ NANDY

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Ashraful Musaddeq 22 June 2009

Lovely touching and full of nice metaphors.

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Priyanka Bhowmick 22 June 2009

poetry in love issshhhhtyle..! ! ! seems like a romantic poetry night...lovely scripted! !

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