Manonton Dalan

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071010A flash on my mind


sudden coldness touch my skin
i saw clock it's barely pass eleven
pulled sheets for comfort; relax
so quiet besides hums from attic
i wiggled my toes; i feel walking
i give it up i rather be sleeping

moment i thought about octopus
could it be, he has been coached
whatever it is, it's amazing choice
paula and paul are names today
one for us open; one for world cup
not favorable for lance; bye france

***
paula creamer won lpga us open
paul (octopus) predicted spain victory in world cup
lance armstrong crashed on 8th stage tour de france
(it's over for him; just too far out of contention)

Submitted: Monday, July 12, 2010

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