062. I Saw Three Birds Poem by Jaden Knight

062. I Saw Three Birds



I saw three birds
of colour green
build a house
that can’t be seen

These elephants planted
a silver rose
yet it has grown
an orange nose

A shed of blue
and darkened red
a seven eyed cuckoo
to bake the bread

A cyan can
to eat the wheat
a bath which owns
some smelly feet

A dog to make
a bed of straw
a horse to suckle
two wild boars

A carnivorous donkey
that does not sleep
a rhino eating bananas
a multi-coloured sheep

What you have read
and you have seen
has actually never been
as you look up to the sky
I think it’s time to say good bye

Wednesday, February 26, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Fun
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 03 October 2015

“cy•an ˈsīˌan, ˈsīən/ noun noun: cyan 1. a greenish-blue color, which is one of the primary subtractive colors, complementary to red “ who knew? it is a blue! ! bri :) - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - A dog to make a bed of straw a horse to suckle two wild boars................. ................. you must have eaten some bad limes, as you 'forgot' to make (here) rhymes! may i suggest: a dog to make a bed of straw a horse to suckle two wild boars in awe.................? OR a dog to make a bed of whores a horse to suckle two wild boars...........? sorry, Profanisaurus, but i THOUGHT i'd already put this or another of your poems into my/our October a showcase for PH poets long ago. but i guess i must have eaten some of the same bad limes! ! ! ! ! ! bri :) i'll get it in ASAP.

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Alesia Leach 10 November 2014

LOL that's a strange zoo you got there.

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