(043) Cloned Hearts Poem by premji premji

(043) Cloned Hearts

Rating: 3.0


Dear,
Let's be
two cloned hearts,
from the cells of
true,
serene and
selfless love!

Let's be
silent planets which
revolve around
love eternal
in harmony!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C T Heart 25 July 2008

From a lucid sparkling river of love streaming in thy veins of heart...be thy soul a DNA to clone an eternal love... Love, Heart

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Kesav Easwaran 25 July 2008

well...premji, a poem bit different here...sweet sincere and romantic 10

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Rema Prasanna 25 July 2008

Good philosophy but difficult to practice, for a sword at least you keep a stiletto for safety.... I find poetic beauty in this write. Well expressed 10 Rema

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Maitreyee Joshi 19 February 2010

the crux of the matter is that prem, yr poem defines love so well.thanks......

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Mamta Agarwal 03 December 2009

what you seek is beyond human nature, but may your wish and aspiration be fulfilled. YOU SAY A LOT IN A FEW WORDS mAMTA

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Pandian Angelina 13 June 2009

Cloned and bored In complementing Differences, we find Our pits filled And hills mowed A smoothness Then sets in With a surety To last forever! I may be wong But, the Dead Sea Longs for Jordan To fill and dissolve Her salt, her tears! Leena

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Tara Chettur 06 April 2009

Dear premji, thanks for your comments...... Precise words...10 + this cloned hearts are for the lovers in heaven it seems............. tara

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Martine Kolber 25 July 2008

Wow, great feelings and beautifully written; -) Love it; -) take care, Martine

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