0358 One For Bill Poem by Michael Shepherd

0358 One For Bill

Rating: 2.2


Redheads, with their fiery hair
oft have a temper that can scare.
Can God and Nature so conspire
to scarify with hair and fire?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Shepherd 23 February 2005

oh cripes, 'Rusty', now it all makes sense...so no more jokes about 'Dusty' then?

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Rusty Daily 23 February 2005

Michael, Just to let you know from one who has red hair, the onset of gray tends to subdue the fire to barely glowing embers. North and South. lol Rusty

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Sean Furlong 23 February 2005

I enjoyed this poem. I want to say it feels like all the words are tidy and in their right place. The rhyme and rhythm schemes work well.

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Michael Shepherd

Michael Shepherd

Marton, Lancashire
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