02 Night Sky Poem by Akhil H Kumar

Very good.good feel & nice imagination.

I really enjoyed reading this poem. Very interesting. I loved the last two lines. Good Work.

'Moon is our guide towards success and Sun Is the path of success Work hard in light, to get reward in night.' Very nice.

hello boy a nicely driven Philosophical slab. keep going :)

hi akhil, you're very talented for your age. well, i must say keep writing.

A well lived day - Brings a night, Full of fun and joy Else it becomes A time to grieve. Well said in this poem. Thank you, young poet.

A very nice write, my friend. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you C R Clark