[02] Cruel Time Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq
[02] Cruel Time
What's happening or to be happened
On the other bank of the river?
Is there any modest bonsai well and good-
Any ribbon to connect far and near?
Occurrence is loosing its phenomenon
Magic can't peeps through eye sights!
Scorching sunny day rolling on dusts
Moon-less night sits on insomniac grill
Dark-blue grief walks on a rope-way
Situation is a cruel demand for network!
Time is walking on the cool wave
Alien is calling from an unknown chip!
Poem 03
Book 'Firefly Can't Make a Day' February 2008
Copyright Writer
Rhythm Publishers, Dhaka, Bangladesh
ISBN 984-8319-63-8
'Time is walking on the cool wave' wow! amazing! ........10
A wonderful poem with well expressed epithets like ''cruel time'' and cognitive metaphors like: ''Time is walking on the cool wave'', used to highlight the transformation of nature under the action of time......I like it very much... so there is my little 10++ for this great poem...
flowing with depth.... as what Palas said..'i can feel but cant express' and i too cant express the impact it brings to me, my thoughts into words this piece is great...very elegant...meaningful 10++++
very deep....i cant really comprehend this though lol hopefully you would describe the thoughts you are conveying in this poem?
what should i say? ? ? ? ? ? ? what a poem this is? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? keep going
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/23/2024 4:21:48 AM # 1.0.0.1119
I cannot recommernd this writing, but I did give it a 7, which is my highest non recommendation score. The writing is quiite good in fact. The problem is the purpose of the writing and the meaning of the lines. I cannot understand either. GW62