[02] Acquitted Desire Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

[02] Acquitted Desire

Rating: 3.6


A butterfly died of a heart attack
While you were laughing on the window
Catfish jumped on the bank of a tank
Cool sleeping dog shaking dreams like tail.

Trust blooms in front of summer
Melting heart flies over floating algae
Snail crossing prickle heat zone of back
Acquitted desire moves around bangle.



Poem 01
Book 'Firefly Can't Make a Day' February 2008
Copyright Writer
Rhythm Publishers, Dhaka, Bangladesh
ISBN 984-8319-63-8

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alancia Lebogang Mogorosi 08 September 2008

a lovely poem, unpredictable. a well hidden art in the words

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Fred Babbin 10 September 2008

The connections of the words are too disjointed to understand what you are really saying.

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Gaitty Ara 19 September 2008

wowww... that is fabulous.. a butterfly dies of heart attack, while you were laughing at the window. .it is unique and so well expressed! !

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Albert Wong 23 September 2008

Yeah, a poet should know using strange words to express an idea likes magic art., like you have done, words might be even conflicted, it is a kind of what so we called beautiful art. Good job, A. Musaddeq!

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Mehedi Faysal 28 September 2008

a poet is a magician...a poet can create magic with word... Mr. Ashraful Musaddeq....u've shown that in this poem...

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rago rago 24 June 2009

The first stanza itself presented in an unique way and steal the heart........

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'Melting heart flies over floating algae' The first pulsation of Life in algae... Not in 'Fugitive Silence' [a recent post of mine] But in Serene Silence a 10 + dr. sakti. 19.06.09. India

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Brishti Mazumdar 08 June 2009

As always..a unique thought process...10 is a must...Brishti

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Brishti Mazumdar 08 June 2009

As always..a unique thought process...10 is a must...Brishti

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Rommel Mark Marchan 13 May 2009

great butterfly died on heart attack i never think that way as you thought great poet keep in touch

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