(..01july3) Reflections Of A Late Afternoon (Re-Edited) Poem by Max Reif

(..01july3) Reflections Of A Late Afternoon (Re-Edited)

Rating: 3.3


1.
How is it that a day
begins long and slow,
a world just born
and beginning to unfold

and then,
looking back
from its other end,

we see there's only
a short stump of a thing?

What happened
to all that promise?
Surely

there's as much God
in the molecules of the evening
as in those of the morning.

Something has fled
or been consumed,
and I guess
it was something
in me.

2.
But when a man
devotes his days to building
what he loves

and he feels spent,
he knows all
that's gone out from him
now resides
in the thing he's making

and he can relax
knowing nothing is lost.

Indeed, what lived
only in him
now lives
where all can find it.

3.
And maybe a poet
is building
that kind of home, as well.

Though it's not
in a space
with two-by-fours
and sheet rock, yet

it has windows
and yes, a door,

and you can enter
and leave uplifted.

And because it's not
a landmark on a hill,

maybe it's a little
more magical,
a city
that comes out of the air
fullblown
from these little
black marks on a page.

4.
I do
some of my best work
when I'm exhausted
and think there's nothing left.

And then I rest satisfied
beside the new little structure,
added on to the vast
domicile the spirit
has created

that is nowhere on the earth
but offers refreshment to many.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Max this is really coo! I like this poem a lot! ! ! 10 for me! this going on my favorite poems list! This is an encouraging poem. Keep up the AWESOME WORK! !

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Max Reif 04 July 2007

Worked with my wife to further refine this one. The earlier version had these lovely comments: Metamorphhh (aka J. Crawford) (7/3/2007 10: 44: 00 PM) A very mature and enlightening perspective, Mr. Max. And we, too, are structures built by the universe, made of dreams and hope and folly, with entrances and exits, and eventually the paint fades, and we fall apart, and are eventually scrapped, and recyled...but maybe existence remembered to take a few photographs. At least, I'd like to think so...mm jim hogg (7/3/2007 3: 51: 00 PM) Puts on clear display the majesty of the thought processes and outlook of one Max Reif. Modest, ethically solid and far seeing. Strolling through this section of the vast structure you have created, at my leisure, was a true pleasure. You have good cause to rest satisfied by the side of this. It is a true work of art on what we are and the well from which our thoughts spring and are drawn. jim

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