0188 A Marvel To His Coy Mistress Poem by Michael Shepherd

0188 A Marvel To His Coy Mistress

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me, the bow,
you, the cello;
me, mc squared;
does it follow,

sexual activity
relates to relativity?

my energy,
your mass;
can we equate
such love,
my lass?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 12 March 2006

Wow this is captivating and really enjoyable.Great Write Love Duncan

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Gina Onyemaechi 29 January 2006

I'm with Raynette on this: with such keen and tempting words, I don't see how Ms X could possibly resist you! Tee-hee! Regards.

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Marcy Jarvis 13 October 2005

haha. I prefer Herrick not toying with his mistress.

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Raynette Eitel 12 October 2005

This borders on brilliant, Michael. Bravo! ! (and very sexy, if the woman has a brain at all.) R.

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Shelley B. Keats 12 October 2005

very clever and succinct! I liked it and so would Andrew M.

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