[01] Tragic Song Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq
[01] Tragic Song
Into the thousands megaton moon-light
A pretty cool dream lying on the orchid petals
in an evening
A silver coin idol moon smiling to the east
With deep desire to dance on the palm
of the firefly
But the sorrows are putting blues
around a moon on the sky
And composing the longest tragic song!
Poem 35
Book 'Beckoning Jade-Dreams' April 2007
Copyright Musharrat Mahjabeen
Mizan Publishers, Dhaka, Bangladesh
ISBN 984-8700-82-X
This one is great, you can really picture it, and thanks for reading my poem!
the title is so captivating and interesting... the lines are impressive..dreamy...so poetic... with depth... creates great impact...felt like floating with the moon in the sky.. your thoughts painted a beautiful picture... still a very beautiful poem though ended in tragedy... 10++++ l♥ vel♥ ts, maia
I am as always amazed by your creative metaphors that spark my mind, alas in tragedy there is infinite empathy, well done 10
Ashraful, You offered the reader as tragical... But very beautiful poems... 10... Best wishes, Tsira
i was attracted by the title and it didn't fail me... a great poem.. u can visualize these words easily.. it gives a dreamy-like atmosphere.. would the theme be how harsh reality spoils dreams! ! i 've seen it this way... loved it
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 9:31:17 AM # 1.0.0.1119
This is dreamy, , and the tragedy in the last line 'needs' a chorus of angels, , profound write in composition and theme, ,10