0053 More Heartstone Than Headstone Poem by Michael Shepherd

0053 More Heartstone Than Headstone

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Here lies the grave
of the very, very brave -
pray mark it with a song

who died defending
the arguably right
from the army of the
arguably wrong.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mireille Laborie 30 June 2006

It's so so true. cemeteries are full of very brave's tombs.

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Brian Dorn 30 June 2006

Michael, perfect use of the word 'arguably.' You make a valid point... well done! ! Brian

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Padraic O' Reilly 30 June 2006

This is incredible work. The language use is perfect. Nicely done.

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Danny Reynolds 30 June 2006

What nobler cause could there be for improving the rhymes in your poetry? Nice one Michael.

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 30 June 2006

Nicely said! ! ! ! !

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Michael Shepherd

Michael Shepherd

Marton, Lancashire
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