(005) Revelation: Brooklyn Bridge (Cinquain) Poem by Leeanndra O'Lear

(005) Revelation: Brooklyn Bridge (Cinquain)

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Within
the solid steel -
a giant, thumping heart.
This sturdy Brooklyn overpass
has soul.

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good use of the form. i could hear the traffic's thump.

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Goldy Locks 13 May 2006

i love to sit under the brooklyn bridge & get frightened out of my wits by the train that rumbles right over your head - there's an awesome little public park right by the river where you can see a painter on any numbered day. good write, Lee, its nice to see someone use different styles on here.

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