005. A Volcano Erupts Poem by Jaden Knight

005. A Volcano Erupts

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The lonely darkness
swallows up the light of day
nothing is left of the light
but a thin pin prick

The pin prick opens
the dark is lit up
a fire burns bright
the flames reach up
with burning hands

Three silver rings
thick and thin
a circle of gold
bubble in the fire

As gold liquid flows
the thunder is heard
as grey light is lit up
from the volcano

Tuesday, February 25, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This number 5 in my collection. Written during a PE lesson in which i had forgotten my kit. I consider myself lucky i had a note book with me at the time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 25 April 2015

Poetry Eruption lesson? appropriate. never leave home without a notebook, or a writing stick. bri :)

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Nancy Oyula 15 September 2014

Nice one...............

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Farina Afrin Malik 15 May 2014

The description is really quite vivid. I loved how it gave me a vibe of the essence of Lord Of the Rings.

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