003 Close To Mine Poem by Manonton Dalan

003 Close To Mine

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i gave you a push
you raise your legs
onto handlebar
gliding down
valley; i come
rolling, tumbling
lots of fun

i didn’t get up quick
i laid down and wait
feeling cool ground
soothing my bruises
i saw bloom, so close
i kiss with my nose

with a glimpse
you’re blocking sun
as you run closer
to where i am
you ask me, if i’m ok
then you lay close to mine

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 13 August 2013

a good write I saw bloom so close I kiss my nose.

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*Trusting You* 23 December 2008

i gave you a push you raise your legs onto handlebar gliding down valley; i come I love it this is so cool. good job. Crystal

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