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Mary Naylor
(1/3/2009 12:24:00 PM) |
I thought this was a beautiful and romantic poem. The imagery was lovely and original.
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*Trusting You*
(12/23/2008 11:18:00 PM) |
this has a lot of images in it. well done enjoyable piece.
Crystal
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Sathyanarayana M V S
(12/22/2008 10:38:00 AM) |
Very sweet, tender love feelings. Really so good to read and I may not be able to easily forget this piece.
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Kiran Raza
(12/19/2008 2:10:00 PM) |
this poem has a deep feeling in it
you really brought it out to life because as i was reading it,
i could feel what was happening.
a poem has to be be very well written in order for that to happen.
good write.
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Juan Carlos Abeti
(12/18/2008 8:09:00 PM) |
inspirational and very well wtitten, great.
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Jayaprakash Panicker
(12/17/2008 7:51:00 PM) |
Dear dalan,
YOur words of senses really touch me, and as i went on reading it, i was able to see the person wrting, and i see the person written about, i see the visual and finaly was able to the locale, the sound, smell and even sun. how wonderful your words are. they are being potent enough to make the reader another being the same sensitivity and sensibility. i greatly admire your young words. great dalan, thank you for writing to me introduciing you to me primarily and your poem thereafter. i love your lines.
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google for: VAATUPURA OR Jayaprakash A Panicker.
thank you very much.
jaypeescopies@yahoo.co.in
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Penny Hemans
(12/17/2008 3:19:00 PM) |
how nice it is to read words that portray the purest of hearts...well done manonton, keep on, blessings, penny
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Linda Winchell
(12/17/2008 2:47:00 PM) |
Very visual piece of two lovers embracing. Linda
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